looks good, but a few questions.
are you a vaizard (which has the mask) or half hollow (does not have the mask, instead hollow takes over)
also, to start role-playing you don't need a zanpakuto or anything, but if you are going to fight, I would request you have one.
but otherwise it looks really good, I'm glad to see new members, I hope to see his powers, and I am looking forward to playing with you.