MNF-Ghosts (Maria finds a world that is so familar, but so far away) (complete)

(man I need help, to develop the rest of this, if you have any suggestions, or ideas, on how to further develop the plot, until Maria is fully grown, and or Helena's objectives with NF are complete)

Maria walked forward through the sand, dragging her feet, as she conserves energy till prey is found. Here eyes pulse, a red glow of blood, as she sees movement. there is a twitch, and the small squirming worm was in her mouth. She swallowed it whole. A small amount of energy filled her, but by little. The things that had once been filling, left her hungry still. Her thirst for blood was great, and the hollows of Hueco Mundo were too little, she had to search wider. A line stretched out across the landscape, and opened with a ripping of fabric, as a torrent of raw energy spewed forth and reveled a chasm. Maria stepped forward and trudged on.

At the end, another line appeared. When it opened a calm landscape of Karakura town could be seen. everybody was going around enjoying themselves. People were riding bikes around, and some people were walking through the park. They all looked tasty, but Maria had a hard time choosing which one to devour.

She stepped down and landed on a tree. It shook a little, and to the humans it simply appeared as if squirrels were running around. She looked around and spotted a young man. she lunged and latched on with her fangs.

(come on guys join in, and interact with Maria. I would at least like to have somebody participate before I close this stage of evolution.)

The blood covered her fangs as it was drawn from the wound. She smiled, and felt the power drain from the body, and seep into her own system. The humans down were bitter. Their blood was filled with worry, and human emotions. They were some of the worst tasting things ever. She let the lifeless body drop, and licked her lips. However, it satisfied her hunger. Now that she was no longer blinded by the thirst she moved around town. Something about this particular area interested her.

(Anybody at all. Just need somebody. I didn't really get this part planned. and I don't like skipping development, and evolution, with only one post)

Trizon sees maria he approches her in his true fourm and waits to see what would happen

Maria walked on checking out the scene. People went about their day. Some rushing to get to work, others shopping for groceries. She stopped in the mouth of an alley. no one noticed her, but she saw everything. She saw a man standing in front of a woman, with a knife. He proceeded to abuse her, and then finally kill her, and take her stuff. She felt strange. like she should feel sympathy for the girl, but she felt nothing. She walked over to the body and ate the soul that emerged.

She looked up a moment later. Another man walked towards her. However, unlike the others he noticed her. She widened her stance, and prepared to spring at any moment, either in offense, or retreat. The man gave her no memory, nothing but curiosity came from the man.

well if it isnt maria im the twin trilon the one that caused this to you im here to help you my name is trizon he isnt as good as you might think will you come with me and i will help you grow stronger by the way im arracana" said trizon

(lol she kinda sounds like a retard to me.)

She just stared. Nothing the man said or would ever say, would make her remember. She tried to communicate, but was at a loss on how to do so. She had awoken, a gillian, and with no memories nor emotions. She was like a baby, that had be given the power to kill whatever threatened her. She struggled, and eventually spat something out. I... I d ont kn know you. Her voice sounded cracked and broken, and from her body that was still changing, was deeper, than it was when she was alive. Y. You are a.. a str ang er to me. She turned the other way and walked out of the alley and into a shadow on the sidewalk. She didn't like the sun, and preferred to stay out if possible.

Well your memory will come in time said trizon as he pulls out a orb containing a few hundred souls that he had collected over the months

Maria sniffed the air, and turned around. The souls in his hand were condensed, and looked appetizing. She moved slowly towards Trizon. Wh What makes you so sh sure? She stopped infront of him. She was considerably taller than him at the moment, both in bulk and height. You dont even g give me the ff faint.. faintest recognition. Wh whats to say you aren't L..lying to me?

Because I am like just like you in a different state girl he says as he tosses her the orb

She caught the orb. The souls screamed for freedom. There were hundreds, more than she could catch in a week. She put her mouth close to it and tasted it. a little energy came off. she felt the presence of every being as she bit into it. The power drained slowly into her. raw power that made her feel wonderful. She was the incarnation of gluttony, looking forward to every meal. She could feel her body react to the multitude of souls. She lifted her head. Her red eyes, glowing intensely. She was going to respond, but couldn't bring herself out of the feast.

Trizon waited for maria to finsh feasting on the souls then says come with me and there will be lots more souls

She finished the globe of them. She felt great, like she could kill anyone at all. She even felt like she knew more. She was stuttering less and less. Thank you. How have you gathered this many spirits? She followed the strange man. He was worth her time. She was crazy now, and didn't care. it was like an addiction. She wanted more and more. and every time she got some, she only wanted it that much more. She was glad that it wouldn't kill her. At least that's what she thought.

I have a place I go to that is full of spirts suddenly they are in the darkside of yinyang forest trizon turns to maria kill everyone you find just don't harm the trees have fun and is gone but not far away waiting to see what would happen

She grinned. It will be my pleasure. She was off. She was faster than her human self, which was already faster than most, unaided. She zipped through the trees, searching for prey. She soon smelt it. She stopped a few yards away from a from a dark tribe hunter. Good he was alone. She did a half sonido and attacked him. Her claws dug into his chest, as she leaned in to bite his neck. Blood came forth, and strengthened her. She could tell that he was a strong man, but not strong enough. He soon fell limp, and she tossed him aside. She was on a blood frenzy now.

Trizon followed maria pulling out a small orb and threw it to maria and said now maria here is some one worth your time he has the energy of a thousand souls now marzon since you failed me for the last time prepare to die and mizu is freed from his prison and off and runing

(wait are you tlaking about some random guy named Mizu, or are you talking about Burke(Kidbushido's character)? Caue if it is Burke, then do you mind telling me how this happened? Because I don't remember seeing anything about him getting trapped, or you getting control of him.)

Sorry the dude that stole trilons body him

(I don't remember any of this, but whatever. Backstory maybe?)

Maria watched as the orb fell to the ground and a man took off running. She went to the orb and picked it up. It smelled strongly, she tasted the inside. and got a taste for his energy. this was going to be fun. he might be a bit much for her, but she didn't care. She ran ahead. following the taste in the air. No one could hide from her. From the orb before, and the native. She felt empowered and her body felt strange. It had begun to change. She was slimmer now, an her braids had begun to shrink. Her skin began to have extra fat coming off, and she started to look less masculine.

this was getting fun trilon was going suffer whenhe finaly found maria thought trizon as he followed maria

Maria was gaining on Mazron. Eventually she caught up with him and tackled him to the ground. Stop running, you little worm. She grinned, and the smile glowed red. When she opened her mouth,a blazing ball of energy could be seen. She fired it at Mazron, hopping to catch him off guard.

Sinking into the ground and out of a near by tree nice try girl but you can't win here not without Trilon to save you says mazron suddenly the forest floor brings up aencent tree roots that wraps around Maria's arms

Maria sonidoed out of the way, which was more akin to teleportation than high speed and jumped behind Mazron. You people keep talking about this person Trilon, but I don't remember him. She swung her claws outwards at him, and then switched to the other hand for a follow up attack.

mazron Jumps out of the way of the claws by meare inches only to be stabed in the chest and to crumble to the ground as Trilon stood there looks Maria in the eye and shouts look into my eyes and see the truth flooding maria's mind with memories hoping to make this quick and send Maria to soul soicty